Do you like these lyrics? its called through the iris by 10 years?

Cherish


Two circular hues of blue with a gray shade


So captivating


More than you know





False perceptions


That brought forth these questions of


Truth, love and hope


Now that you're injuring


I carry you with me just


Please hold on





Disappear and dissolve


A weakening wall


Will one day fall


It's wise to sever our loss


I redefine pulse


Through your iris





Love's not all lost


But it's nailed to my cross


And crucified all that I've held on


To be awaiting


Anticipating a touch such as yours





False affection


A spawn of neglection


A love, lust, hoax


Please understand me


That now where you're standing


Is closer then I'd hoped





Disappear and dissolve


A weakening wall


Will one day fall


It's wise to sever our loss


I redefine pulse


Through your iris





Your Iris


Your Iris





Disappear and dissolve


A weakening wall


Will one day fall


It's wise to sever our loss


I redefine pulse


Through your iris





Disappear and dissolve


A weakening wall


Will one day fall


It's wise to sever our loss


I redefine pulse


A new iris

Do you like these lyrics? its called through the iris by 10 years?
I think you would like the band MUSE. They're British, and really good. These lyrics sound like something Muse would make.





Falling Down (by muse):





I’m falling down


And fifteen thousand people scream


They were all begging for your dream





I’m falling down


Five thousand houses burning down yeah


No one is gonna save this town





Too late


I already found what I was looking for


You know it wasn’t here


No it wasn’t here





I was calling your name


But you would never hear me sing


You wouldn’t let me begin





So I’m crawling away


'Cause you broke my heart in two yeah


No, I will not forget you





Too late


I already found what I was looking for


You know it wasn’t you


No, it wasn’t you


Noooooo





Falling away


You never see me fall


No, I could not forget you


Falling down


A thousand houses burning down


No one is gonna save this town





Too late


I already found what I was looking for


You know it wasn’t you


No, it wasn’t you


No





Falling down


Now the world is upside down


I’m heading straight for the clouds
Reply:no sorry but their not very good and i think who ever wrote this has issues
Reply:I don't think too much of it. didja do it yourself using one of these services for random lyric generation?
Reply:The lyrics at deeper read appear to be about someone finally having found security in the mediocrity of someone elses life...convincing some chick that life sucks but its okay cuz "hey Im happy"....





...he also may be suggesting that she has big eyes...
Reply:Well, if you REALLY want a critique...





1. You cant have a 'circular hue'. Doesnt make sense.


2. 'Now that you're injuring'? Terribly unclear. What does that mean?


3. How do you 'sever a loss'. A loss is something already gone. You cant sever it.


4.'Neglection', not a word





Sometimes it cheapens good lyrics when they 'sound' like they're profound but don't really mean anything, you know?
Reply:I really like the lyrics. I'd have to hear the music to be sure...but the lyrics are quite moving.